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    雅思小作文——流程图(Diagram)题目解析及高分范文

    雅思小作文——流程图(Diagram)题目解析及高分范文 雅思作文题目展示  雅思作文—流程图写作解析广州申友雅思写作Sofia老师今天跟大家分享关于雅思小作文——流程图的写作技巧。之前分享的小作文类型都是数据的,会比较分析。流程图不同于前面几种小作文类型,它主要是描述事件发生的步骤顺序,通常用序号或者箭头标识顺序的先后,步骤间的逻辑关系。 雅思写作范文The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates. The diagrams show how house designs differ according to climate.The most noticeable difference between houses designed for cool and warm climates is in the shape of the roof. The designs also differ with regard to the windows and the use of insulation. We can see that the cool climate house has a high-angled roof, which allows sunlight to enter through the window. By contrast, the roof of the warm climate house has a peak in the middle and roof overhangs to shade the windows. Insulation and thermal building materials are used in cool climates to reduce heat loss, whereas insulation and reflective materials are used to keep the heat out in warm climates.Finally, the cool climate house has one window which faces the direction of the sun, while the warm climate house has windows on two sides which are shaded from the sun. By opening the two windows at night, the house designed for warm climates can be ventilated. 以上的分享就是广州申友雅思写作Sofia老师帮大家整理出来的关于雅思作文——流程图(Diagram)题目解析及高分范文啦! 更多雅思学习备考资料,也可以免费领取!   快来拿资料学习雅思啦!找到我的方式:扫码以下二维码,添加烤鸭潇洒姐微信,即可免费领取雅思备考资料啦!  【特别提示】广州申友雅思培训机构课程详细了解1、请联系官方电话:020-875897242、请联系官方微信:175204179633、广州地址:广州市天河区体育西路103号维多利广场B座26楼K15      深圳地址:深圳市罗湖区书城路都市名园B栋5楼  

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    2020-08-31 14:33:48

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    雅思写作——哲理类话题全解析及范文

    雅思写作——哲理类话题全解析及范文 雅思作文题目展示 雅思作文题目解析广州申友雅思写作老师Sofia的分析:关于雅思作文哲理类的题目,同学们总是不知道如何下笔,比如上面这道剑桥真题大作文,需要同学们去论述的是“为什么幸福很难定义呢?”这种抽象的问题让学生很伤脑筋,但其实发散思维,从多个角度思考并不会太难,还是有很多可写的,广州申友雅思写作Sofia老师在这里提供给大家如下几个着笔方向:1、对不同的人来说,幸福意味着不同的东西。2、它可以被描述为一种愉快或享受的感觉。3、人们喜欢与家人和朋友在一起。4、爱好、运动和游戏可以是乐趣和享受的来源。5、有些人把钱看作幸福的源泉。6、其他人对幸福的定义是更深层次的东西。7、他们需要感到他们在一生中做着有益的事情。8、有些人从他们的工作中获得成就感。9、还有一些人在养育孩子中找到快乐。由总分的结构,由浅入深的探讨幸福的多种来源。  雅思写作范文那根据这个思路,我们看一下具体的文章是如何构成的:Happiness is difficult to define because it means something different to each individual person. Nobody can fully understand or experience another person’s feelings, and we all have our own particular passions from which we take pleasure. Some people, for example, derive a sense of satisfaction from earning money or achieving success, whereas for others, health and family are much more important. At the same time, a range of other feelings, from excitement to peacefulness, may be associated with the idea of happiness, and the same person may therefore feel happy in a variety of different ways.It is no doubt true that the majority of people would like to be happy in their lives. While the personal nature of happiness makes it difficult to describe, there do seem to be some common needs that we all share with regard to experiencing or achieving happiness. Although it seems almost impossible to give a precise definition of happiness, most people would agree that there are some basic preconditions to achieving it. Firstly, it is hard for a person to be happy if he or she does not have a safe place to live and enough food to eat. Our basic survival needs must surely be met before we can lead a pleasant life. Secondly, the greatest joy in life is usually found in shared experiences with family and friends, and it is rare to find a person who is content to live in complete isolation. Other key factors could be individual freedom and a sense of purpose in life.In conclusion, happiness is difficult to define because it is particular to each individual, but I believe that our basic needs for shelter, food and company need to be fulfilled before we can experience it. 以上的分享就是广州申友雅思写作Sofia老师帮大家整理出来的关于雅思作文——哲理类题材的雅思作文题目分析及雅思作文范文啦! 更多雅思学习备考资料,也可以免费领取!   快来拿资料学习雅思啦!找到我的方式:扫码以下二维码,添加烤鸭潇洒姐微信,即可免费领取雅思备考资料啦!  【特别提示】广州申友雅思培训机构课程详细了解1、请联系官方电话:020-875897242、请联系官方微信:175204179633、广州地址:广州市天河区体育西路103号维多利广场B座26楼K15      深圳地址:深圳市罗湖区书城路都市名园B栋5楼     

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    2020-08-25 16:00:19

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    雅思写作——社会热点类话题全解析及范文

    雅思写作——社会热点类话题全解析及范文 雅思作文题目展示  雅思作文题目解析广州申友雅思写作老师Sofia的分析:从文题看,这其实是让我们对许多国家的人口老龄化问题做一个分析讨论。题目也给出了方向:这种情况的优缺点是什么?优点是大于缺点的吗?首先,我们要先辩证分析它的优缺点;其次,给出我们相应观点的论据,优点大于缺点,或者说,缺点大于优点的原因。那从多方面考虑,人口老龄化还是带来比较多的问题的,热点新闻平时也有许多相关报道,所以从缺点大于优点这一方面着笔是比较好展开的。这里给同学们提供下思路:优点:从侧面看出国家的繁荣昌盛,经济的繁荣,社会安定有序,科技的发达,生活条件的提高等等。缺点:1. 社会负担加重。2. 2.社会文化福利事业的发展与人口老龄化不适应。3. 家庭养老功能减弱。4. 老年人对医疗保健、生活服务的需求突出。  雅思写作范文In many countries, young people are often seen as the driving force of the economy. Therefore, policies to increase birth rates are generally encouraged. But there are also a variety of potential social problems arising if the younger population keeps rising and exceeds the number that a country is able to sustain. It is true that a relatively large number of young adults may pose a threat to economic growth. The overcrowding of younger population inevitably leads to intense competition in the job market,and this would be followed by rising unemployment rate. Over the past few decades some developing countries like China adopted one-child policy in an effort to balance the population, and this effectively alleviated the pressure on the job market. If there were no such policy, there would be many unemployed young people, causing much pressure on economic growth.  However, the advantages of having a larger younger population are also evident. In some countries, economic development is stifled due to lack of human resources, e.g. Singapore. Here the country has more than adequate job opportunities and resources and in fact must get much of its labour force from abroad. To solve this problem and hence invest in its own economy, Singapore is introducing polices to attract a much larger youthful population. Without the youthful population, the country would struggle to see economic development. In conclusion, I think that the large younger population can bring more advantages than disadvantages; however, it must be understood that too much of an imbalance can lead to difficulties in the future. 以上的分享就是广州申友雅思写作Sofia老师帮大家整理出来的关于雅思作文——社会热点类题材的雅思作文题目分析及雅思作文范文啦! 更多雅思学习备考资料,也可以免费领取!   快来拿资料学习雅思啦!找到我的方式:扫码以下二维码,添加烤鸭潇洒姐微信,即可免费领取雅思备考资料啦!  【特别提示】广州申友雅思培训机构课程详细了解1、请联系官方电话:020-875897242、请联系官方微信:175204179633、广州地址:广州市天河区体育西路103号维多利广场B座26楼K15      深圳地址:深圳市罗湖区书城路都市名园B栋5楼   

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    2020-08-25 15:57:01

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    雅思写作——教育类话题全解析及范文

    雅思写作——教育类话题全解析及范文 雅思作文题目展示1、It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies.What should education consist of to fulfil both these functions? 雅思作文题目解析广州申友雅思写作老师Sofia的分析:一、题目提到了教育重要性的两个方面:一方面是关于个人,另一方面是对于社会。关于社会角度,可以从促进经济发展、增加社会流动性以及维护社会稳定这几个方面来展开;对于个人,可以写改变思维模式、有利于个人就业和健康生活来写。二、题目最后提出了疑问:要实现这两种功能,教育应该包括什么?所以接下来我们还要针对这个问题做出讨论,比如:大学应当主要教授理论知识还是实践技能?大学的是应当把学生培养成合格的公民还是让他们自己得益? 雅思作文题目展示2、Many people use distance-learning programmes(study material post, TV, Internet, etc.)to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?雅思作文题目解析广州申友雅思写作老师Sofia的分析:远程教育最大的好处,就在于三个any: anybody, anywhere, any tim缺点:缺乏师生之间以及学生之间的 interaction;缺乏教师的 moral guidance,而且因为没有体育课且久坐电脑前,会引发健康问题。 雅思写作范文关于第一个教育类话题,我们来看一篇范文: With the rapid development of modern society, education is becoming more and more crucial to both individuals and societies. The issue over what education should consist of has considerably aroused peoples’ wide concern. In this essay, I seek to explore this complicated topic from diverse perspectives and what influence could be brought. Among the most important aspects education should consist of , one should be stressed is professional knowledge education. On one hand, under the fierce competitive circumstance, people who have professional skills and experience attract many big companies. Therefore, study about one special area gives people more opportunities to hunt an ideal job. On the other hand, this education is also significant to develop societies in a long run.Besides, It is also noticeable that physical education is necessary for students, especially for teenagers. If you want to achieve success in the modern societies, strong body is the first premise. So education should push people to take care themselves ,which could bring a healthier society. Last but not least, we should not lose sight of psychological education. Psychological problems are serious nowadays and a sizable percentage of people suffer from them. A survey conducted by a famous research organization indicates that over 40 percent of students have various psychological problems, who really need help from school and society. Even worse, if such problems cannot be solved, they could hamper the progress of well-being society .Judging from what have been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that three aspects cannot be separated in education, which play vital important roles in the growth of individuals and societies. The fulfillment of both people and societies can be done as long as we lay emphasis on three aspects mentioned above.     以上的分享就是广州申友雅思写作Sofia老师帮大家整理出来的关于雅思作文——教育类题材的雅思作文题目分析及雅思作文范文啦! 更多雅思学习备考资料,也可以免费领取!   快来拿资料学习雅思啦!找到我的方式:扫码以下二维码,添加烤鸭潇洒姐微信,即可免费领取雅思备考资料啦!  【特别提示】广州申友雅思培训机构课程详细了解1、请联系官方电话:020-875897242、请联系官方微信:175204179633、广州地址:广州市天河区体育西路103号维多利广场B座26楼K15      深圳地址:深圳市罗湖区书城路都市名园B栋5楼   

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    2020-08-25 15:47:15

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    雅思写作——环保类话题全解析及范文

    雅思写作——环保类话题全解析及范文 雅思作文题目展示 雅思作文—环保类话题解析     广州申友雅思今天分享一篇关于关于废物利用的雅思作文,这个也是近年来比较热点的话题,废物利用是能源再生的良好途径,于环保,经济,能源,国计民生有百利而无害,合理的废物利用是利国利民,节能低耗,造福后代的举措。     这个雅思作文题目中需要去辩证思考的问题:    一些人说家里没有足够多的垃圾废品可以回收再利用,他们说唯一增加回收利用的办法是政府使之法律化。    你是否认为为了让人们更多回收利用废弃物,法律手段是必须的?  关于这个问题,广州申友雅思Sofia老师带大家从以下两方面考虑:一方面,法律条款可以帮助人们建立和培养回收利用的意识,强制性的法律可以高效震慑和约束人们进行回收利用,因为一旦不遵守就有成本付出;另一方面,收利用本身是一个合作性的行为,有法律干涉后,显得非常严厉和压迫性,容易引起人们的不满,反而不利于人们去理解回收利用背后的真正的重要性和必要性。 雅思写作范文As environmental pollution has long been a concern for many, it is sometimes argued that making laws should be the only way for governments to encourage waste recycling. As for me, it would be wrong to hold this point of view.Admittedly, by enforcing environment laws, citizens would be obliged to recycle most of their household waste, or else they will be fined or penalized by governments. In view of this, people can indeed develop a stronger sense of recycling. However, I think calling for legislation is by no means an enduring solution, partly because of the opposing voice – that this would be somewhat arbitrary and partly because citizens cannot possibly bear green awareness in their mind all the time. Also, some individuals might violate the law simply because they cannot distinguish between recyclable garbage and throw-away ones. Therefore, it seems unjustified to promote recycling only by laws and regulations. Accordingly, a variety of actions can be adopted to reverse this trend. Firstly, children should be educated about environmental issues from an early age by offering lectures on environmental protection and garbage recycling. Secondly, governments can encourage young adults to take down-to-earth actions by providing recycling service and increasing easy-to-reach recycling facilities in the local community. Finally, younger generations might be ignorant about garbage recycling, especially when Western consumerism has been embraced worldwide. They tend to believe that it is good to buy new products instead of reusing the old ones, so governments can reward those who recycle waste on their own, which would set a good example for others. In conclusion, nobody wants to see our planet surrounded by garbage. Governments should adopt every possible measure to advocate waste recycling, instead of simply depending on legal means.      以上的分享就是广州申友雅思写作Sofia老师帮大家整理出来的关于雅思作文——环保类题材的雅思作文题目分析及雅思作文范文啦!     更多雅思学习备考资料,也可以免费领取!   快来拿资料学习雅思啦!找到我的方式:扫码以下二维码,添加烤鸭潇洒姐微信,即可免费领取雅思备考资料啦!  【特别提示】广州申友雅思培训机构课程详细了解1、请联系官方电话:020-875897242、请联系官方微信:175204179633、广州地址:广州市天河区体育西路103号维多利广场B座26楼K15      深圳地址:深圳市罗湖区书城路都市名园B栋5楼 

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